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Traveling Zoom Practice

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Uhh... posted this on my tumblr forever ago but er... yeah... idk

anyways, she's supposed to be like in some sort of vehicle and the wind is blowing in her face, if that wasnt obvious. OTL Zooming is hard. I cant seem to keep it consistent QAQ if you have any tips/crits/input, please feel free to throw them at me. QuQb Its very choppy, I know... but I think im not very good at making smooth animation orz

Frame count: 18
Tools: azdrawing2


Please do not steal/post any of my animtions (or artworks orz) on other sites QuQ You don't know how much work goes into them, thank you QuQ
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The placement of the of the arm shifts a bit oo much and ends up looking shaky as well as the chair. There isn't enough clarity in the hands motions once it approaches the hair and would look better had it been kept still near her face. I think the timing between the beginning and after the zoom can be increased by a t least a frame more you can probably get away with double framing the beginning. I love the transition out and how you were messing with the angle. Ik this stuff takes so long given the quality of each drawing but that low fps kinda makes easing rather difficult and more reliant on flow to make it appear smooth. what would normally be around 3-6 frames of slow down/acceleration is probably 1-2 at best for you at 8-12 fps . Anyway I hope to see more of what you do