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Wannabe skateboard by Nachooz Wannabe skateboard by Nachooz
Posted on tumblr also: [link]
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Ugh. For the life of me I could not get this to work the way I wanted it to OTL Constructive critiques welcome and appreciated QuQ/

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p.s. sorry if I dont get to answering your comments and questions Q__Q But I read them all, I promise! ;u;;

Frame count: 33; 16fps
Work time: 4 hours
Tools: AzDrawing2
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Critique by X-tremes Oct 12, 2012, 2:28:05 PM
Not bad, Not bad at all!
One of the things I do like about this very much is the sketch shading and consistency of style you kept throughout making this, however some minor details can change everything, and some of those I have noticed.

The animation is somewhat glitchy at times and could flow a bit better, the jump at the end is related to this as is the run cycle in which it appears she freezes, and easy way to avoid this is to run through the animation in preview mode and then pick some of the frames which are more or less longer than the rest.

I really do like your style though, please do keep it up :) I'll be expecting more great animations from you!
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This seems to be an overall very energetic animation. The eyes seem to pop open so suddenly however it strikes me as a bit odd to see them pop open so quickly near the end there. The hair movement is gorgeous and flows nicely except from one frame where her hair length seems to lose it's constancy for about one frame; Also her bangs appear to transition from a strange edged cut to a shaggy/spiky cute in several frames. Likewise during the jump her feet seem to just shrink in perspective a bit too much mid jump. The only thing I could think of there would be to add a few blur frames to make the transition of perspective a bit smoother. Mid jump her bow's size consistency seems to get larger than it's usual proportions. The skirt of the dress and the arm movements are very well done so are the first few steps of the character. The skate board seems to also disappear for a fraction of a moment. Overall I'd say this is still a good animation. Of coarse it could be refined but your key frames definitely tell the story well. I'm looking forward to seeing more animations done by you and hope to encourage you to keep up the good work!
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WildPowerxJ Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
these are so fun to watch
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AnimeHatta72 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
May i please wut program u used
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Nachooz Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Azdrawing2 ^^
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firesafeara300 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Your animation skills is God heaven.
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Octavia057 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Just a random passerby saying great animation. 
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Sol-Tamida Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Professional Filmographer
lovely
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SEINICK Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Student Filmographer
Smooth. Great skatebordgirl.Clap 
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Adenocromo Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Really pretty. Good animation, great design. The distance between the frames is really invisible, I like it.
Uh, azdrawing 2 is better than flash? You like it?
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WhitestAsian Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Filmographer
I play too much League XD

For her first two steps I hear "Crit, Crit" then when she lands on the skateboard, I screamed, "BOOM!"

Fantastic animation by the way :D Very dynamic movements and the character is uber cute as well.
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