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Submitted: August 9, 2009
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Animation Test - turnby *Nachooz

Digital Art / Animation

Soo... my tablet miraculously works... =___= wtf.
idk what's wrong with this piece of crap... I'm still getting a new one tho... D< *wanted a new one anyways*

but anyways, before my tablet starts malfunctioning again, I thought I'd do a short animation =u= They're so fun to do <3333 ;u;;; I wanted to practice turns and zooms. It turn out ok I think. Hair and clothes are definately hard to animate correctly tho. :'D I hope you like~

Tools: Sai, Adobe ImageReady
Frame count: 27

*edit* Thanks for all the faves everyone ;u; and it's even been requested as a print, but i don't think animations can be print? xD
It's also been asked to do in color buuuut... I'm actually really lazy when it comes to coloring animations =u= The drawing part is fun, the coloring.... not so fun OTL so I don't think it's gonna be in color for some time ;u;;; and as for all the crits, THEY WERE ALL REALLY HELPFUL <3333 ALSKFALKSJFAS *takes all into consideration*

Critique by !cizmic Jul 5, 2012, 3:49:49 PM

I would like to congratulate you on making this work of art as curiously mind-blowing as it is.Your method of putting your thoughts into your art is wonderfully amazing. It is clear to me that you gave it an honest go with your gratuitous range of powers. The line of this work is decisively suitable for the symbolism that I feel you are trying to create, but however, in saying that this statement is likely inane. On the other hand, I think that your implementation of dimension could have used some improvements as I feel that it wasn't able to break even with the brilliance obvious in the whole of the art work. To finish I would like to reassure you that it has been a thrill to invest energy in this assessment for you and I hope it will enable you to revamp your artwork.

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Critique by ~FudgeFiddle Apr 29, 2012, 4:44:49 PM

For not being very experienced with animation, yes, this is very good, but it is also very lacking. This is certainly far from perfect, but still good. The animation is quite choppy, and the last seconds of where it zooms in is very choppy. I would suggest drawing in-betweens to make it smoother.

Also, I'm unsure as to what the last part is. Is she leaning in? Is it zooming in? Is she walking towards the camera? As I said before, that last part is very choppy and unclear.

Lastly, I think if you keep practicing you could definitely make some very detailed and fluent animations. Practice practice practice!