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very good using legs, but too quick in air. i suggest twist the body to touch down the ground make it noticeable and use hands to skid on the ground. however, your landing is very good and hit it on bulleye. top chest should lean forward a bit to take on weight to land on ground, skid backward with hair fan out not only to side. :) i love action moves so your motion is best ever i seen ! use expressions also so to give feeling to the person move why she move backward to defend or get away? thank you
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Critique by kumeo Oct 26, 2014, 2:58:33 AM
I really like the animation you have done here, the girl jumps pretty smoothly. And yes, it's looping haha! Anyway, again the jump animation is really good, not much to worry. Her position as she jumps shows how accurate she will be able to make such a flip, and the seriousness of her her expression shows that there is a reason to jump from whatever is getting her. Although, what I do reccomend when she is about to jump is to make her look "ready." She comes in a little too quickly. All and all, this is good! ^^ Well done!
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MegaFreedom1274 Featured By Owner May 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Woah! That's so cool!! :D How did you learn how to do that?
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Nachooz Featured By Owner May 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! 8D with lots of tears, sweat, and blood OTL OTL OTL
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:iconmegafreedom1274:
MegaFreedom1274 Featured By Owner May 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
XD No problem! :D

*Starts drawing stick figures like crazy*
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spiritofinteligence Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so awesome acrobatics 

wonderful flow 
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:iconauroranimation:
auroranimation Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Hobbyist
cool
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:iconlobo-loco:
Lobo-Loco Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015
excellent motion! love it!
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superhilalo Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015
hi love u r work do u do free lance i wont to animate feet bastinado shot for 20 second i will pay u 60 dolar for the shot if u intrest contact me on my mail superashour@hotmail.com ok
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yezuus Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015
No one is going to do a 20 second animation for shit pay like that. 
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superhilalo Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
sorry its not me ho ask its my friend its a mistake i meant that i wont to animate just 1 shot thats aall can u do it or not
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lulykawaii Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
awesome!
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Zitatchi Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Student General Artist
This is really cool! ^_^

Also yes the playback is looping. ^_^ 
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ZahraChuu Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
so cuuuute *^*
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Kawaii-Ricecake Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Student General Artist
could you please do a tutorial on how to animate in azdrawing :3
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createimpossible Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
COOL! Movement is awesome xept when it look like she hit the floor and slid back on purpose. That part didn't flow right but other than that, coolio!
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Someotakufreak Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014   General Artist
I like it but it looks like she slid back while she was on the ground :/ She stopped for a split second and then slid back.
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ric-c Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Great job, looks fun. I think it can use more tension/impact when she hits the ground again. But otherwise good job.
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UltimateFangirl1234 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
........................................I think that there will come a time when I will be a helluva more surprised of your failture than your success.....................
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:iconsuperdaughter2:
Superdaughter2 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014
awesome
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:iconfaithwalkers:
FaithWalkers Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Professional General Artist
I can't stop staring at this! I just love how amazing this animation is!
- Yennie Fer
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jsac38 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Amazing work as usual!!
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Liketheisland Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Very nice! Just a couple things: It seems like she slides too far back at the end. The jump's arc looks more vertical than horizontal, so I think her momentum would be more likely to stop when she landed. Also, the perspective makes it look like she jumps back and to the left instead of just straight back (which I think you were going for). If her position were shifted just a bit to the left of the frame at the beginning, the action would make more sense spatially. Other than that, great job! 
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Nachooz Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah! I see, that makes sense. Thank you~
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Deadlytwins Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Woah, this is just amazing :iconsawbplz: :heart: Your animations are always amazing  ♥ but how can you make your characters look nice/pretty while still moving? ._. Did you figured out in the process of animating lots and lots of characters?
Anyway, hope you get a critique soon :iconjunesplz: 'cuz this is a really good piece ^_^ Hope you don't mind the :+fav: Your works are incredible and you're always challenging yourself to make new or harder animations :)  and that's something more than incredible!
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Nachooz Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww QAQ thank you so much :hug:
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Tonttun Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Student
looks like she just jumped out from a train.
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Miichau Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your works are just as wonderful as always! ♥
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roido-kun Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing animation! Very smooth, love it!
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MockingJ15 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry this may seem really weird of me to ask, would you mind if I attempted to colour it?
Just colouring/shading...
You could say no
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Nachooz Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't mind you coloring it but i would prefer if you not post it up anywhere after you color QuQ
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fifi-kawaii Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow so cool
i like it so much :) 
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Nachooz Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks QuQ
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:iconfifi-kawaii:
fifi-kawaii Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're so welcome :') 
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KaigaraProjects Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
I'm on my computer and the loop works for me!

I love her landing 8D
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:iconnachooz:
Nachooz Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you 8D
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WinnDixieX3 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's awesome animation!
And yeah, it loops on my pc :D
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:iconnachooz:
Nachooz Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks 8D I think it's my pc that's working funky.
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Moreuse Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yep it loops just fine.

It looks good, though to me it looks like the actual flip is slightly to fast. I have yet to see many real life flips like that though so i'm not the best judge
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Nachooz Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^
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Moreuse Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
welcome.
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air482 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
Amazing
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Nachooz Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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ZombieRanchero Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NNNGGHHH!! so awesome
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Nachooz Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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:iconavelix:
Avelix Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014   Digital Artist
this is so cool *o* and yes it's looping just fine!
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:iconnachooz:
Nachooz Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok thanks 8D I guess there's just something wrong with my computer.
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Miruukii-hime Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome animation!!
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Nachooz Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~
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Miruukii-hime Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
You're welcome ^^
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le-pink-piglet Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
uwaahhhhh it came out looking amazing!
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Nachooz Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ Ty~
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